Sunday, November 17, 2013

Starting to Write the Draft: Beginning at the Beginning

Three Ways In

Try to write the introduction in 3 different ways to exam yourself and develop the starting point in your research project

My consideration as below:

   1. Sometimes I watch the scientific fiction movie and feel exciting about the unrealistic things. For example, the one of famous box office movie "Matrix" is the movie based on what will be happening in our future society. There is the one, which is not a human being, supercomputer rules the human society in future. The movie shows that machines put all human beings in one place to control their mind. All human beings are no longer to live in real life but the virtual image of life which the supercomputer creates.

   2. The anti-Christian movements are getting more diffusion and cruel in Middle East. Recently, more than 50 churches in Egypt have been targeted and the attacks have continued since August 14. Now, almost less than 10 percent of Christians survives in threaten of anti-Christian Egyptians. The Muslim's fanatic faith in their god "Allah", concludes the result of violent. Their way of evangelism is not based on love but forcing that it seems there is no peace and liberalism. A common sense I find between the anti-Christian movements in Middle East and the "Blue Chip" is controlling with threatening.

   3. The foundation of the United States of America is based on the Christian belief. Some godly people settled down in America to seek the religious freedom from the corruption in Europe. Now the "Liberty" and "Equality" provides good opportunity for everybody in America. Therefore many people seeks the success life in American as well knows as we call "the American Dream." The capitalism and secularism has been marched so fast as our society has developed. Now we are seeking our own comfort that our focus is on how to live more convenient and joyful which creates extreamely individualism. It is all about our life in the earth that we only care about our outward. The motivation of Christian belief is no longer essential for our life that we do not care about our spiritual things. I believe the "blue chip" will be the fulfillment of our satisfaction that most people will follow its system. We will be under controlled of the one who is anti-Christian.

It is very important moment which is the beginning that i need to have right direction before I go into my whole research paper.
Three different ways of composing help me to have different perspectives that I can choose more fluent way for the body of my research paper.

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